ENG8 Q3W5D3: Evaluating the Effectiveness of Opinion Editorials

In this lesson, you will bring together everything you have learned about claims, evidence, and bias to judge how effective an opinion editorial really is. You will use simple criteria such as clarity of claim, strength and relevance of textual evidence, fairness and balance, and overall organization. As you read short editorial excerpts, you will practice giving comments and simple scores instead of saying only “I like it” or “I don’t like it.” By the end, you will be able to explain why an editorial is strong, weak, or somewhere in between.

• Subject: English 8 – Evaluating Opinion Editorials
• Grade: 8 (KS3)
• Day: 3 of 4

🎯 Learning Goals

By the end of the lesson, you will be able to:

1. Use clear criteria (claim, evidence, organization, tone, fairness) to evaluate at least two short opinion editorials or excerpts.
2. Give written comments and simple scores that explain the strengths and weaknesses of an editorial’s argument in at least 5–7 sentences.
3. Compare two editorials on the same or related issues and justify which one is more effective, citing specific textual evidence and development principles.

🧩 Key Ideas & Terms

• Evaluation – The process of judging how strong or effective a text is based on clear criteria.
• Criteria – Standards or measures used when judging something (for example, clarity, evidence, fairness, organization).
• Coherence – The logical flow of ideas; how well the sentences and paragraphs connect.
• Organization – The way parts of a text (introduction, body, conclusion) are arranged.
• Effectiveness – How well a text reaches its purpose and influences its target audience.
• Rubric – A scoring guide that describes different levels of quality using criteria and descriptors.
• Counterargument – A point or reason that opposes the writer’s claim, which may be addressed in the editorial.
• Concession – When a writer admits that an opposing point has some truth before responding to it.
• Call to action – A part of an editorial that urges readers to do something, such as support a policy or change a behavior.

🔄 Quick Recall / Prior Knowledge

Connect today’s evaluation task with what you learned in Days 1 and 2.

1. What are two questions you can ask to identify the main claim of an editorial?
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   Examples: “What does the writer want readers to believe or do?” and “Which statement in the introduction or early paragraph clearly expresses a stand on the issue?”
2. Name two types of textual evidence and give a short example of each.
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   Statistic: “In a survey of 100 students, 80% said they feel stressed.” Example: “One Grade 8 class improved their scores after using a reading corner for a month.”
3. How can you tell if an editorial shows bias?
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   It uses loaded language, attacks people instead of ideas, ignores or misrepresents opposing views, or presents only benefits without mentioning possible disadvantages.
4. Why is fairness and balance important when evaluating the quality of an editorial?
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   Because fair and balanced writing is more honest and trustworthy. It shows that the writer considered different sides, which makes the argument stronger and more respectful.

📖 Explore the Lesson

How to use this section: Work through six checkpoints. Each one guides you from simple criteria to full evaluation. Read carefully, jot down notes, then answer the guiding questions before revealing answers.

Checkpoint 1 — What Does It Mean to “Evaluate” an Editorial?

Mini-goal: Understand evaluation as more than just “liking” or “disliking” a text.

Guided discussion: When someone asks, “Is this editorial good?” it is tempting to answer, “Yes, I like it” or “No, I don’t.” But evaluation in English class is not only about personal taste. It means judging a text using clear criteria: standards that you agree on before you read. For opinion editorials, common criteria include clarity of claim, strength and relevance of evidence, fairness and balance, organization and coherence, and appropriateness of tone for the audience.

Instead of saying, “I don’t like this editorial,” a good evaluator asks, “Is the claim easy to find and understand? Are the reasons specific and supported by evidence? Does the writer treat other views fairly? Do the ideas connect smoothly from introduction to conclusion?” By asking these questions, you move from reacting with feelings to thinking with reasons. Your goal is to give comments that someone could actually use to improve the editorial.

Real-life tie-in: In real life, you constantly evaluate—songs, movies, apps, teachers, lessons—but you may not always explain why. Learning to use criteria helps you give fair feedback, such as for a friend’s speech, a class project, or a social media campaign. This is a valuable skill for both school and work.

Mini-summary: To evaluate an editorial is to judge how well it achieves its purpose using agreed criteria. It is less about personal taste and more about clear, reasoned comments based on the text itself.

1. Why is “I like it” not enough when evaluating an editorial in class?
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   Because it does not explain what is strong or weak in the text or how to improve it; it is only a feeling, not a reasoned judgment based on criteria.
2. Name at least three criteria you can use when evaluating an editorial.
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   Possible answers: clarity of claim, strength and relevance of evidence, fairness and balance, organization and coherence, tone, and effectiveness of conclusion or call to action.
3. How can using criteria make your comments more helpful to a writer?
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   Criteria help you point to specific parts of the text (claim, evidence, tone, etc.) and give focused suggestions instead of vague praise or criticism.

Checkpoint 2 — Building a Simple Evaluation Rubric

Mini-goal: Create and understand a simple rubric for judging editorials.

Guided discussion: A rubric is a scoring guide that lists criteria and describes different levels of quality. For evaluating editorials, you might use four main criteria: (1) Claim and purpose, (2) Evidence and reasoning, (3) Fairness and tone, and (4) Organization and coherence. Each can be rated, for example, from 1 (weak) to 4 (strong). The numbers are less important than the descriptions.

Criterion	4 – Strong	3 – Satisfactory	2 – Needs Improvement	1 – Weak
Claim & Purpose	Very clear, specific claim; purpose obvious.	Claim mostly clear; minor confusion.	Claim present but vague or hidden.	No clear claim or purpose.
Evidence & Reasoning	Several strong, relevant pieces of evidence with clear explanations.	Some good evidence; explanations may be brief.	Little or weak evidence; some reasons unsupported.	Almost no evidence; mainly opinions and feelings.
Fairness & Tone	Respects other views; tone appropriate and polite.	Generally fair; tone mostly appropriate.	Shows some bias or loaded language.	Very biased; attacks or insults others.
Organization & Coherence	Clear intro, body, conclusion; ideas flow smoothly.	Parts are present; some jumps in ideas.	Weak organization; confusing flow.	Very disorganized; difficult to follow.

You do not have to use this exact rubric, but it gives you a model. When you evaluate, you can give each criterion a level and then write a short comment. This helps you see which part of the editorial is strong and which part needs revision.

Real-life tie-in: Rubrics are used not only in English but also in job performance reviews, scholarship screenings, and contests. Learning how to use a rubric now prepares you for many future evaluation tasks.

Mini-summary: A rubric turns general criteria into a clear set of levels and descriptions. It guides both scoring and comments so that evaluation becomes fairer and more organized.

1. In the sample rubric, which criterion focuses on how the text is arranged?
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   Organization & Coherence.
2. Why is it useful to have descriptions (not just numbers) in a rubric?
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   Descriptions explain what each level looks like, helping both the evaluator and the writer understand what must be improved.
3. If an editorial has a strong claim but almost no evidence, how might you score it for “Claim & Purpose” and for “Evidence & Reasoning”?
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   It may score high (3 or 4) for “Claim & Purpose” but low (1 or 2) for “Evidence & Reasoning,” showing a mixed overall performance.

Checkpoint 3 — Evaluating Claim, Evidence, and Reasoning

Mini-goal: Apply the rubric to judge the strength of claim, evidence, and reasoning.

Guided discussion: Consider this imagined excerpt:

“Our barangay should create a weekend clean-up program for rivers and canals. In a recent school project, we collected three sacks of plastic waste from a small creek near the subdivision. Environmental groups also warn that blocked waterways make flooding worse during typhoons. A clean-up program would help students learn responsibility and protect our community from severe floods.”

The claim is clear: “Our barangay should create a weekend clean-up program…” The evidence includes a specific example (three sacks of plastic waste) and an expert-type statement (environmental groups warn…). The reasoning connects garbage to flooding and community safety. This editorial would likely score high in “Claim & Purpose” and “Evidence & Reasoning,” though we might still ask how often clean-ups would happen and who would join.

When you evaluate, you can underline the claim, circle the reasons, and highlight the evidence. Then, ask: Are the reasons fully explained? Are there gaps? For example, the writer might add a statistic about recent floods or the cost of damage to make the argument even stronger.

Real-life tie-in: Many community campaigns—like tree planting or recycling drives—are supported by short persuasive texts. Being able to evaluate the quality of their claims and evidence helps you decide which causes to support and how to improve your own advocacy messages.

Mini-summary: Evaluating claim, evidence, and reasoning means checking whether the main stand is clear, the reasons are specific, and the evidence is strong and clearly linked to those reasons.

1. In the excerpt above, what is one strong piece of evidence?
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   The example that students collected three sacks of plastic waste from a small creek during a school project.
2. What is one question you could ask to push the writer to improve the reasoning?
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   Sample: “How often would the clean-up program be held, and how many people would need to join for it to make a big difference?”
3. If another editorial on the same topic had a vague claim and no statistics, how would its “Claim & Purpose” and “Evidence & Reasoning” scores compare?
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   It would likely score lower because the claim would be harder to identify and the evidence much weaker or missing.

Checkpoint 4 — Evaluating Fairness, Tone, and Bias

Mini-goal: Judge how fairness and tone affect the overall effectiveness of an editorial.

Guided discussion: Even if a claim is clear and evidence is strong, an editorial can still be weak if it is unfair or uses a harsh tone. Consider two versions of a sentence:

A: “Only lazy residents ignore community clean-up activities and let the barangay drown in garbage.”
B: “Some residents ignore community clean-up activities, which makes it harder for the barangay to manage waste.”

Version A attacks people by calling them “lazy” and exaggerates (“let the barangay drown in garbage”). Version B focuses on behavior, not character, and explains the effect without insulting anyone. When evaluating, you look for whether the writer treats different groups with respect and acknowledges opposing views fairly. Fairness does not mean the writer has no stand; it means they do not twist or attack other sides.

Tone also matters. A serious issue might require a serious tone, while a school-related issue can have a lighter, hopeful voice. If the tone is too angry, mocking, or careless, readers may resist the message even if the evidence is good. In your rubric, “Fairness & Tone” helps you capture this dimension.

Real-life tie-in: In everyday arguments, people sometimes lose their message because they use insulting words. Learning to evaluate tone in editorials can remind you to choose your own words more carefully when you speak or post online.

Mini-summary: Fairness, balance, and respectful tone are not “extra decorations”; they strongly influence how readers trust and accept an editorial’s message.

1. Between versions A and B in the example, which one would likely score higher for fairness and tone, and why?
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   Version B, because it avoids name-calling, focuses on actions, and describes the problem calmly.
2. Give one sign that an editorial is trying to be fair toward opposing views.
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   It mentions other views honestly, explains their reasons, and responds respectfully instead of mocking them.
3. How can a good tone still be firm and persuasive?
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   By using clear, confident language, strong evidence, and respectful wording that encourages readers to think instead of attacking them.

Checkpoint 5 — Evaluating Organization, Coherence, and Call to Action

Mini-goal: Examine how the structure and flow of an editorial affect its impact.

Guided discussion: Organization and coherence help readers follow the argument without getting lost. A well-structured editorial usually has a clear introduction (with claim and hook), body paragraphs (each focused on one reason or point), and a conclusion (that summarizes and often includes a call to action). Coherence means that ideas connect smoothly using transitions and logical order.

Imagine two editorials with the same claim. Editorial X jumps from one idea to another, repeats points, and introduces new information at the end with no explanation. Editorial Y presents one reason per paragraph, uses transitions like “First,” “Another reason,” and “Finally,” and ends with a strong call to action. Even if their evidence is similar, Editorial Y is more effective because the reader can easily follow and remember the argument.

A call to action might say, “Write to your barangay officials,” “Join the next clean-up drive,” or “Start by reducing your own plastic use at home.” When evaluating, you ask: Does the conclusion clearly show what readers are invited to think, feel, or do?

Real-life tie-in: Clear organization is important not only in writing but also in speeches, presentations, and announcements. People are more likely to listen and respond if your message is easy to follow from beginning to end.

Mini-summary: Effective editorials guide readers through a logical structure and end with a clear call to action. Poor organization can hide even strong ideas.

1. What are the three main parts of a typical editorial structure?
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   Introduction, body (several paragraphs with reasons and evidence), and conclusion (often with a call to action).
2. Give one example of a call to action for an editorial about school reading programs.
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   Sample: “We encourage every student to borrow at least one book from the library this month and join the reading challenge.”
3. Why can good organization improve the reader’s understanding even if the editorial is short?
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   Because clear order and transitions help the reader see how ideas are connected and remember the main points more easily.

Checkpoint 6 — Comparing Two Editorials

Mini-goal: Practice comparing two editorials on similar issues using your criteria.

Guided discussion: Suppose you have two short editorials about the same topic: banning single-use plastics at school. Editorial A has a clear claim, gives two statistics from a student survey, and presents one strong counterargument (“Some students worry that reusable containers are expensive”) before answering it. The tone is firm but respectful. Editorial B has an interesting claim but mostly relies on emotional stories, calls people “careless,” and does not mention any opposing view.

Using the rubric, you might rate Editorial A higher in “Evidence & Reasoning,” “Fairness & Tone,” and “Organization & Coherence.” Editorial B might be strong in having a passionate voice but weak in fairness and evidence. When comparing, you should not simply say which one you “like” better. Instead, you write: “Editorial A is more effective because…” and then mention specific criteria and examples from the texts.

Comparing is a powerful evaluation task because it forces you to explain your reasons clearly. It also shows you that there can be many ways to write about the same issue, and that quality depends on how claims, evidence, fairness, and organization come together.

Real-life tie-in: In elections, advertisements, or campaigns, you often see competing messages about the same issue. Being able to compare them using criteria helps you make wiser choices as a citizen and consumer.

Mini-summary: Comparing editorials means judging which one is more effective using shared criteria and giving clear, text-based reasons for your judgment.

1. In the example, why would Editorial A likely receive a higher score for fairness?
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   Because it mentions a counterargument (concern about cost) and responds to it respectfully instead of attacking people.
2. Give one reason why Editorial B might still be partly effective for some readers.
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   Its emotional stories and passionate tone might capture attention and make the issue feel urgent, even if evidence and fairness are weaker.
3. When writing a comparison paragraph, what two things must you always include?
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   You must state your judgment (which editorial is more effective) and support it with specific examples linked to clear criteria (such as evidence, tone, and organization).

💡 Example in Action

1. Example 1 – Using the Rubric on a Short Excerpt
   Excerpt: “Our school should offer more mental health programs for students. According to the guidance office, many learners visit the clinic because of stress and anxiety. A monthly wellness seminar and peer-support groups could help students feel less alone.” Evaluate “Claim & Purpose” and “Evidence & Reasoning.”
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   Claim & Purpose: Strong – the claim is clear and specific. Evidence & Reasoning: Fairly strong – guidance office information (expert-type) is used and connected logically to the proposed programs, though more data or examples could make it even stronger.
2. Example 2 – Commenting on Tone
   Excerpt: “Teachers should stop giving surprise quizzes because they are a cruel way to torture students.” How would you comment on the tone?
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   The tone is emotional and uses loaded language (“cruel,” “torture”). It may express strong feelings but could be seen as exaggerated and disrespectful. A more respectful tone would improve fairness and credibility.
3. Example 3 – Suggesting Improvement
   Excerpt: “Our school canteen needs healthier options. The food is bad.” Write one helpful comment using criteria.
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   Sample comment: “The claim is clear, but the evidence is weak. Try adding specific examples or health information, such as the number of fried items versus fruits, to make your argument stronger.”
4. Example 4 – Comparing Two Claims
   Claim A: “The city must ban fireworks.” Claim B: “The city should set strict rules and safe zones for fireworks instead of banning them.” How might you compare these claims as starting points for editorials?
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   Both claims are clear and debatable. Claim A suggests a total ban, while Claim B suggests regulation. An evaluator might say that both are good starting points, but they would look for different evidence and counterarguments in each editorial.
5. Example 5 – Writing a Short Evaluation Statement
   Given a short editorial that has a clear claim but weak evidence and a biased tone, write a one-sentence evaluation.
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   Sample: “The editorial clearly states its stand, but it is not very effective overall because it relies on personal attacks and opinions instead of strong, fair evidence.”

📝 Try It Out

Use your notebook to answer. Then check the suggested answers as a guide, not as the only correct responses.

1. Copy the four main criteria from the sample rubric (Claim & Purpose, Evidence & Reasoning, Fairness & Tone, Organization & Coherence) and write a short description for each in your own words.
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   Teacher may look for descriptions similar to: “Claim & Purpose – how clear and focused the stand is”; “Evidence & Reasoning – how strong and relevant the support is”; “Fairness & Tone – how respectful and balanced the language is”; “Organization & Coherence – how well the parts are arranged and connected.”
2. Choose one short editorial or teacher-provided excerpt. Using your rubric, score it from 1–4 on each criterion.
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   Scores will vary. Teacher can ask learners to justify each score with at least one phrase from the text (e.g., “I gave a 3 for evidence because there are two statistics but no expert opinion.”).
3. For the same text in Item 2, write a 3–4 sentence paragraph explaining your overall evaluation.
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   Look for paragraphs that mention both strengths and weaknesses, refer to at least two criteria, and give text-based examples.
4. Rewrite this biased sentence to show a fairer tone: “Only irresponsible parents oppose the new school safety policy.”
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   Sample: “Some parents are worried about the new school safety policy, especially its possible effect on students’ schedules and freedom.”
5. Write two short sentences that could serve as a call to action in an editorial about reading habits.
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   Sample: “Visit the library this week and borrow one book that interests you. Encourage a friend to join you and share what you learned.”
6. Design a simple rating scale (1–5 stars) for editorials and explain what each level means in one phrase.
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   Sample: 5 – Excellent (very clear and well-supported); 4 – Good (mostly strong with minor issues); 3 – Fair (some strengths, some weaknesses); 2 – Weak (many problems); 1 – Very weak (hard to follow or trust).
7. Imagine you are a judge in a school editorial-writing contest. List three questions you would ask when choosing the winner.
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   Examples: “Which editorial has the clearest claim?” “Which uses the strongest and most relevant evidence?” “Which treats different sides fairly and uses a respectful but convincing tone?”
8. Write a one-sentence evaluation of a recent argument you had or observed (for example, about chores, gadgets, or schedules) as if it were an editorial.
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   Sample: “The argument against weekend chores was weak because it used strong emotions but almost no reasons or evidence.”
9. Choose any opinion post (for example, a comment or short paragraph given by the teacher). Identify one strength and one weakness using the words “Because…” in your explanation.
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   Look for answers like: “One strength is the clear stand because the writer says exactly what should be done. One weakness is the lack of evidence because no facts or examples are given.”
10. Reflect in 3–4 sentences: How does using criteria and a rubric change the way you read opinion editorials?
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    Answers will vary. Many learners may say they now read more slowly, pay attention to evidence and tone, and feel more confident explaining why a text is strong or weak.

✅ Check Yourself

Answer these items as a quick self-test. Then check the suggested answers.

1. (Multiple Choice) Which question belongs to evaluation, not just personal reaction?
   a) “Do I like this editorial?”
   b) “Does this editorial use clear evidence to support its claim?”
   c) “Is this editorial long?”
   d) “Is the font style beautiful?”
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   Correct answer: b).
2. (Multiple Choice) Which criterion focuses on how ideas are arranged and connected?
   a) Evidence & Reasoning
   b) Claim & Purpose
   c) Organization & Coherence
   d) Fairness & Tone
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   Correct answer: c).
3. (True/False) A rubric can help make grading and feedback more consistent for different editorials.
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   True.
4. (Multiple Choice) An editorial that uses strong evidence but calls opponents “idiots” would score low in which criterion?
   a) Claim & Purpose
   b) Evidence & Reasoning
   c) Fairness & Tone
   d) Organization & Coherence
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   Correct answer: c).
5. (Short Answer) Define “call to action” in one sentence.
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   A call to action is a part of a text, usually near the end, that tells readers what they are encouraged to do after reading.
6. (Multiple Choice) Which sentence shows a more balanced tone?
   a) “Only stupid people would disagree with this policy.”
   b) “Some people worry that this policy may cost too much, but it can save lives in emergencies.”
   c) “People who disagree are just lazy.”
   d) “Everyone who opposes this is the enemy.”
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   Correct answer: b).
7. (True/False) An editorial with a clear claim and strong evidence but confusing organization can still be considered fully effective.
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   False. Confusing organization can reduce effectiveness even if claim and evidence are strong.
8. (Short Answer) What does “coherence” mean when talking about an editorial?
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   Coherence means the ideas in the text flow logically and smoothly so the reader can easily follow them.
9. (Multiple Choice) When comparing two editorials on the same topic, you should:
   a) Decide based only on which one is shorter
   b) Choose the one that uses the biggest words
   c) Use criteria like claim clarity, evidence, fairness, and organization
   d) Pick the one written by your friend
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   Correct answer: c).
10. (True/False) It is possible for an editorial to be passionate and still fair and respectful.
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    True.
11. (Short Answer) Why should you mention specific examples from the text when writing an evaluation?
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    Because specific examples prove that your comments are based on the text, not just on personal feelings, and they show exactly what is strong or weak.
12. (Multiple Choice) Which combination best describes an effective editorial?
    a) Clear claim, strong evidence, fair tone, and good organization
    b) No claim, funny stories, and many emojis
    c) Very long paragraphs with no examples
    d) Insults, rumors, and unclear conclusions
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    Correct answer: a).
13. (Short Answer) How can evaluating editorials help you become a better writer?
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    By seeing what works and what does not, you learn to use clear claims, strong evidence, fair tone, and good organization in your own writing.
14. (Short Answer) Give one situation outside English class where evaluation skills are useful.
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    Examples: choosing which product or service to trust, judging campaign messages during elections, giving feedback on a group project, or deciding which online information is reliable.
15. (Reflection Check) When you next read an editorial, what is the first criterion you plan to check, and why?
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    Answers will vary. Learners might focus on claim clarity, evidence, or fairness depending on what they find most important or challenging.

🚀 Go Further (optional)

1. Rubric Designer – In pairs, modify the sample rubric by adding one more criterion (for example, “Creativity of Hook”) and testing it on a short editorial.
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   Teacher guidance: Ask pairs to explain why they added the new criterion and whether it changed their overall scores. Use this to discuss how criteria shape evaluation.
2. Judge’s Table – Read two short editorials on a similar topic (provided by the teacher). Fill out a rubric for each and write a brief “judge’s decision” stating which is more effective and why.
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   Teacher guidance: Encourage students to cite at least one example for each criterion in their decision. This can lead to a mock “awards” session for most effective editorial.
3. Peer Review Practice – Exchange short opinion paragraphs with a classmate and use a simplified rubric (claim, evidence, tone) to give feedback.
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   Teacher guidance: Model kind, specific comments (“I like how you…, Maybe you can improve by…”) and remind learners to focus on the writing, not the writer.
4. Editorial Makeover – Take a weak editorial excerpt (biased or poorly organized) and rewrite it into a stronger version while keeping the same claim.
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   Teacher guidance: Ask learners to mark what they changed (e.g., added evidence, improved tone, reorganized points). Compare before-and-after versions in small groups.
5. Community Connection – Identify a real issue in your school or barangay and collect at least three pieces of evidence you would use if you were to write an editorial about it.
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   Teacher guidance: Guide learners to note down source and type of evidence. This can serve as preparation for Day 4, where they may draft their own mini editorial.

🔗 My Reflection

Notebook prompt:

Think of a time when you changed your mind about an issue after reading or listening to someone’s explanation. Describe what made their message effective. Was it the evidence, the tone, the organization, or something else? How will this experience guide you when you write or evaluate opinion editorials?

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Teacher note: Encourage learners to focus on specific features (clear reasons, respectful tone, strong examples) and connect them to the criteria used in this lesson.

Lesson Tools

• 🎯 Learning Goals
• 🧩 Key Ideas & Terms
• 🔄 Quick Recall / Prior Knowledge
• 📖 Explore the Lesson
• 💡 Example in Action
• 📝 Try It Out
• ✅ Check Yourself
• 🚀 Go Further
• 🔗 My Reflection