When you write an opinion editorial on a global issue, your thesis statement is the sentence that tells readers exactly what you believe and where your argument is going. In this lesson, you will learn how to tell the difference between strong and weak thesis statements and how to improve them. You will examine examples connected to global inequality and other world concerns, then revise them for clarity and focus. By the end, you will be ready to craft a one-sentence claim that guides your whole editorial.
🎯 Learning Goals
By the end of the lesson, you will be able to:
- Explain the role of a thesis statement in an opinion editorial on a global issue.
- Identify at least three features of a strong thesis and use them to label sample thesis statements as strong or weak.
- Revise at least three weak thesis statements to make them clear, specific, and arguable.
🧩 Key Ideas & Terms
- Thesis statement – a single sentence that clearly states your main opinion and focus in an editorial.
- Claim – another word for your main point or position on an issue.
- Global issue – a problem that affects people or environments across countries and requires shared action.
- Specificity – the quality of being clear and detailed rather than vague or general.
- Arguable – something reasonable people could disagree with; not just a fact.
- Scope – how broad or narrow a thesis is; what it promises to cover.
- Support – reasons and evidence that back up a thesis statement.
- Coherence – how well the parts of a text fit together to support the thesis.
- Revision – making changes to improve ideas, clarity, and structure, not just fixing spelling.
- Opinion editorial (op-ed) – a persuasive text that expresses the writer’s viewpoint on an issue.
🔄 Quick Recall / Prior Knowledge
Use what you already know about opinion editorials and global issues to warm up.
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What is the main purpose of an opinion editorial?
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The main purpose is to persuade readers to accept a certain viewpoint or consider action on an issue by presenting a clear opinion and supporting it with reasons and evidence.
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Give one example of a global issue you have studied in previous lessons.
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Examples include global inequality, climate change, access to quality education, pandemics, or child labor. Any issue that crosses borders and affects many people is acceptable.
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In your own words, what is the difference between a topic and a thesis?
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A topic is the general subject you are writing about (for example, “educational inequality”). A thesis is a specific statement that gives your opinion about that topic and how you will discuss it (for example, “Governments must invest more in rural schools to reduce educational inequality.”).
📖 Explore the Lesson
Move through each checkpoint slowly. Read, think, and draft in your notebook before checking the sample answers.
Checkpoint 1: What Does a Thesis Statement Really Do?
Mini-goal: Understand the job of a thesis statement in an opinion editorial.
Imagine you are about to lead a group through a busy city. Without a meeting point or a clear route, people will wander off in different directions. A thesis statement is like your meeting point and route in writing. It tells readers where you are going and why they should follow you. In a single sentence, it states your main opinion about a global issue and hints at how you will support that opinion.
In an opinion editorial on global inequality, your thesis might answer questions such as: What exactly is the problem? Who is responsible? What should change? For example, a thesis could be: “For our country to support SDG 10 on reduced inequalities, local leaders must provide free transport for rural students so they can attend secondary school safely.” This sentence gives a clear stance, mentions the global goal, and suggests a specific action.
Without a thesis, your editorial might become a list of disconnected complaints or facts. With a thesis, every part of your writing has a purpose. Your introduction leads to it, your body paragraphs support it, and your conclusion reminds readers of it. When you revise your thesis, you are really improving the whole skeleton of your editorial.
Today you will not write the entire editorial. Instead, you will practise recognizing what makes a thesis strong or weak so that future writing becomes easier and more focused.
Mini-summary: A thesis statement is a one-sentence guide for your editorial. It tells readers your main opinion on a global issue and shapes everything else you write.
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In the sample thesis above, what is the writer asking leaders to do?
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The writer wants local leaders to provide free transport for rural students so they can attend secondary school safely.
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Why might an editorial without a clear thesis confuse readers?
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Readers would see many ideas but might not know which one is most important or what the writer actually wants them to think or do.
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Write a one-sentence explanation of what a thesis does, using your own words.
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Sample: “A thesis tells readers my main opinion and gives a direction for the rest of my editorial.”
Checkpoint 2: Strong vs Weak – What’s the Difference?
Mini-goal: Learn the key features that make a thesis strong or weak.
Not all thesis statements are equal. Some are clear and powerful; others are vague or too broad. To revise your own thesis, you must first recognize the difference. A strong thesis usually has three main qualities: it is specific, arguable, and manageable in length and depth. A weak thesis is often too general, too factual, or too enormous to cover in one editorial.
Consider these two examples on global inequality:
Weak: “Inequality is a big problem in the world today.”
Strong: “To reduce inequality in our region, the government must fund more scholarships for low-income students to attend senior high school.”
The weak thesis gives a topic (“inequality”) but no clear direction. Almost everyone already agrees that inequality is a problem, so there is not much to argue. The strong thesis names a place (“our region”), a group (“low-income students”), and a specific action (“fund more scholarships”). Readers may agree or disagree with the solution, which makes it arguable.
Strong theses also match the length of the assignment. You cannot solve every global problem in one page, but you can focus on one part of a problem, like access to education, health care, or digital tools in a particular context. When you narrow your thesis, you give yourself the chance to add detailed evidence later.
Mini-summary: Strong thesis statements are specific, arguable, and focused enough for the length of your editorial. Weak ones are vague, factual, or too broad.
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Which words in the strong thesis make it more specific than the weak one?
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Words and phrases like “in our region,” “fund more scholarships,” and “low-income students to attend senior high school” make the thesis specific.
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Why is “Inequality is a big problem in the world today” hard to argue with?
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Most people already agree with this statement, so it does not present a clear position that someone might reasonably disagree with.
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Write one sentence that explains why “manageable scope” is important for a thesis.
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Sample: “A manageable scope helps me focus on one part of a global issue so I can support it well in a short editorial.”
Checkpoint 3: Arguable Claims on Global Issues
Mini-goal: Practise deciding whether a statement about a global issue is arguable.
An opinion editorial is built on an arguable claim. This does not mean you must start a fight. It means you make a statement that some people might question, discuss, or reject. Facts alone cannot be a thesis, but they can support it. For example, “Many children in rural areas stop school after primary level” is a fact (if supported by data). A thesis might use this fact but add a viewpoint: “Because many rural children stop school after primary level, governments must remove school fees for junior high to honour their promise under SDG 4 and SDG 10.”
When you look at a possible thesis, ask: “Could someone disagree with this in a reasonable way?” If the answer is yes, you probably have an arguable claim. If the answer is no because the statement is simply a definition or a fact, you need to add your own opinion or recommendation.
Think about global issues such as climate change, migration, human rights, or access to health services. You could state a fact: “Some communities face more flooding because of climate change.” Or you could create an arguable claim: “Wealthy nations must give more support to communities that suffer the worst floods caused by climate change.” Only the second example works as a thesis for an editorial because it argues for a specific action.
Being arguable does not mean being extreme. Avoid language that is rude or impossible to defend. Instead, aim for strong, reasonable claims that you can support with evidence from reliable sources.
Mini-summary: A good thesis is arguable: it is more than a fact and suggests a viewpoint or action that reasonable people might question, debate, or support.
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Is the statement “Global inequality exists in many countries” a good thesis? Why or why not?
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No. It is mostly a fact and does not clearly state what should change or who should act, so it is not a strong, arguable claim.
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Change this statement into an arguable thesis: “Some students cannot afford devices for online learning.”
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Sample: “School districts must provide shared devices and stable internet for students who cannot afford them so that digital learning does not widen inequality.”
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Why should you avoid very extreme or insulting language in a thesis?
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Extreme or insulting language can make readers feel attacked and stop listening, even if your evidence is strong. Respectful wording keeps the focus on ideas instead of personal attacks.
Checkpoint 4: Matching Thesis, Reasons, and Evidence
Mini-goal: See how a thesis must connect with the reasons and evidence you plan to use.
Sometimes writers create a thesis that sounds powerful but does not match the reasons they later provide. This is like announcing that your editorial will focus on transport, then writing mostly about textbooks and teacher training. A strong thesis fits closely with the main reasons and evidence in your outline.
Look at this example thesis: “To reduce global inequality, our government should offer more scholarships for rural students and build safe dormitories near secondary schools.” This thesis suggests at least two main reasons you might develop: scholarships and safe dormitories. Your evidence could include statistics on how many rural students drop out for financial reasons and reports on unsafe travel to school. If you suddenly wrote a long paragraph about climate change with no link to education, your editorial would lose coherence.
When revising, check that each part of your editorial promises the same thing as your thesis. If you already know your main reasons, you can use them to test your statement. Ask: “Does my thesis prepare readers for these reasons?” If it is too broad, narrow it. If it is too narrow for the evidence you plan to use, adjust it to reflect the true focus.
Thinking about this match now will save you time later. It is easier to fix one sentence (your thesis) than to rewrite several paragraphs after you realize they do not fit together.
Mini-summary: A strong thesis fits the reasons and evidence you plan to use. Revising it early helps your whole editorial stay coherent and focused.
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In the example thesis above, what are two ideas readers expect to see in the body paragraphs?
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Readers expect paragraphs about scholarships for rural students and safe dormitories near secondary schools.
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What might happen if you write paragraphs that do not connect to your thesis?
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Your editorial may feel scattered or confusing, and readers may not understand your main message or may feel misled.
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Write one question you can ask yourself to check if a thesis matches your reasons.
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Sample: “If I turn my thesis into a list of promises, do my body paragraphs keep those promises?”
Checkpoint 5: Revising Weak Thesis Statements
Mini-goal: Practise turning weak thesis statements into stronger ones.
Revising a thesis is like sharpening a pencil. The basic shape is there, but you refine it until it writes clearly. Weak thesis statements often need three changes: narrowing the topic, adding a clear opinion, and naming who should act or what should happen. You do not need fancy vocabulary; you need precision.
For example, start with the weak statement: “People should stop inequality.” Ask yourself: Who? What kind of inequality? Where? How? Your answers might lead to: “National leaders in South Asia must increase funding for public schools in poor communities if they are serious about reducing inequality.” Now the thesis is clearer and more arguable.
Try another example: “Many children in Africa do not get a good education.” This may be true, but it is mostly a fact. After asking “So what?” you might write: “To support SDG 10 and SDG 16, African governments and international organizations must work together to train more teachers for rural schools.” Again, the thesis now names actions, actors, and global goals.
When you revise, read your new thesis aloud. Does it feel strong and focused? Can you imagine at least two reasons and pieces of evidence to support it? If yes, you are on the right path. If not, keep adjusting until it gives you and your readers a clear direction.
Mini-summary: You can strengthen weak theses by narrowing the topic, adding a clear opinion, naming who should act, and checking that the statement is specific and arguable.
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What questions did we ask to revise “People should stop inequality” into a stronger thesis?
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We asked who should act, what kind of inequality we mean, where it happens, and how it might be reduced.
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After revising, how did the second example connect more clearly to SDG 10 and SDG 16?
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The revised version mentioned governments and international organizations working together to train teachers, which directly supports reduced inequalities and stronger, more just institutions.
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Choose one of your own earlier thesis attempts. How could you make it more specific?
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Answers will vary, but a strong response might add details about the group affected, the place, and the action needed, such as “urban migrant workers in our city” or “free health clinics in rural villages.”
Checkpoint 6: A Quick Checklist for Strong Thesis Statements
Mini-goal: Build a simple checklist you can use to test any thesis you write.
Writers do not guess whether a thesis is strong; they test it. A short checklist can help you do this quickly before drafting a whole editorial. You can keep the checklist in your notebook and use it whenever you write about global issues, not only in English class.
Here is one possible checklist. A strong thesis should:
- state a clear opinion, not just a topic or fact;
- be specific about the issue, the group affected, and the action needed;
- be arguable—someone could reasonably disagree;
- have a scope that feels realistic for one editorial;
- match the reasons and evidence you plan to use;
- use respectful, reader-friendly language.
In your notebook, copy these points or adjust them to fit your style. Then test one of your own thesis statements. Put a check mark next to each item that your sentence already meets. If you cannot honestly check a box, revise the thesis again.
Over time, using this checklist will become automatic. You will begin to hear when a thesis is weak and needs sharpening, just as musicians hear when an instrument is out of tune. This habit will help you write stronger editorials and other persuasive texts in the future.
Mini-summary: A personal checklist helps you quickly test whether your thesis is clear, specific, arguable, manageable, connected to evidence, and respectful in tone.
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Which item on the checklist do you already do well, and which one is hardest for you?
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Answers will differ. A thoughtful response names one strength (for example, “specificity”) and one challenge (for example, “keeping the scope manageable”) with a short explanation.
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How can this checklist save you time when writing future editorials?
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It lets you fix problems with your thesis early so you do not have to rewrite large sections of your editorial later.
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Add one more item to the checklist that you think is important for your own writing.
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Examples: “Uses simple, clear verbs” or “Mentions SDG 10 or SDG 16 when relevant.”
💡 Example in Action
Look at these worked examples of thesis statements connected to global issues. Study why each one is strong or weak.
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Example 1
“Global inequality hurts many people.”
Decide if this thesis is strong or weak and explain.Show Answer
This thesis is weak because it is very general and mostly factual. It does not say which kind of inequality, who should act, or what should change.
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Example 2
“To reduce inequality in our city, the local government must provide free internet access in public learning spaces so low-income students can join online classes.”
Identify two strengths of this thesis.Show Answer
It is specific (mentions “our city,” “free internet,” and “low-income students”) and arguable (some people may disagree about cost or responsibility). It also suggests a clear action for a clear actor.
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Example 3
“Climate change is a serious problem and must be stopped.”
Revise this thesis to make it stronger.Show Answer
Sample revision: “Wealthy countries must reduce their carbon emissions and fund climate-adaptation projects in vulnerable communities that face the worst floods and droughts.”
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Example 4
“Because many refugee children lose years of schooling, international organizations must partner with host countries to provide flexible, language-supportive education programmes.”
Which checklist items does this thesis meet?Show Answer
It is specific (refugee children, host countries, flexible programmes), arguable, and manageable in scope. It clearly states who should act and how, and it can be supported with reasons and evidence.
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Example 5
“I think inequality is bad and we should all care more.”
Explain why this thesis may not work well for an editorial, then rewrite it.Show Answer
It is vague (“inequality”), uses weak language (“I think,” “care more”), and does not name any concrete action. Sample revision: “School communities must create support programmes—such as tutoring and lunch assistance—for learners from low-income families so that poverty does not decide who succeeds in class.”
📝 Try It Out
Practise writing and revising thesis statements. Work in your notebook and then compare with the sample answers.
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Write a simple thesis on any global issue you know (for example, climate change, health, education, or migration).
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Answers will vary. A sample: “Governments should ban single-use plastics in major cities to protect oceans and reduce pollution.”
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Underline the part of your thesis that shows your opinion, then explain it in one short sentence.
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The opinion in the sample is “Governments should ban single-use plastics in major cities.” Explanation: “I believe this action is necessary to reduce plastic waste in oceans.”
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Rewrite this weak thesis to make it more specific: “Some people do not have good education.”
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Sample: “Rural communities in our country need more trained teachers and safe classrooms so that children can finish primary school.”
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Turn this fact into an arguable thesis: “Many families cannot afford school uniforms.”
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Sample: “Public schools should remove uniform fees or provide vouchers for low-income families so that no child is excluded from education.”
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Write one thesis that clearly connects to SDG 10 (Reduced Inequalities).
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Sample: “To support SDG 10, our government must increase disability-friendly facilities in schools so that learners with disabilities can access education equally.”
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Write one thesis that clearly connects to SDG 16 (Peace, Justice and Strong Institutions).
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Sample: “To build more peaceful communities, police and local leaders must protect all ethnic groups fairly and punish corruption in law enforcement.”
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Look back at a thesis you wrote earlier this school year. Use today’s checklist to mark at least two things that already work well and one thing to improve.
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Answers will vary, but should mention specific features such as “clear opinion,” “needs more specificity,” or “scope too broad.”
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Write a pair of thesis statements: one deliberately weak and one improved version on the same topic.
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Sample weak: “Water problems are bad.” Sample strong: “City leaders must repair leaking pipes and protect rivers from factory waste to ensure safe drinking water for all residents.”
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Swap theses with a partner (or imagine a partner) and give one suggestion to improve clarity or arguability.
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Sample feedback: “Your thesis is interesting, but you could make it clearer by naming who should act and what specific change you want.”
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Choose your favourite thesis from today and copy it neatly at the top of a new page labelled “My Editorial Thesis for Week 7.”
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This thesis will be used in later lessons as the starting point for your opinion editorial on a global issue.
✅ Check Yourself
Answer these questions to see how well you can spot strong and weak thesis statements.
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Multiple-choice: Which sentence is the best example of a thesis for an editorial on global inequality?
a) “Inequality exists everywhere.”
b) “In our city, companies must pay fair wages so that workers can live with dignity.”
c) “Many people are poor.”
d) “Poverty is sad.”Show Answer
The best answer is b) because it is specific, arguable, and suggests a clear action.
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Short answer: Give one reason why “Climate change is real” is not a strong thesis for an editorial.
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It is mostly a fact and does not say what should be done or who should act, so it is not a clear, arguable claim.
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Multiple-choice: A strong thesis is usually NOT…
a) specific
b) arguable
c) manageable in scope
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The correct answer is d).
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Short answer: Rewrite this weak thesis to make it stronger: “Children should be in school.”
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Sample: “Governments must enforce laws against child labor and provide financial support so that all children can attend school instead of working.”
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Multiple-choice: Which feature below does not belong on a thesis checklist?
a) Clearly states an opinion
b) Names a specific issue or group
c) Uses respectful language
d) Contains as many ideas as possibleShow Answer
The correct answer is d); a thesis should focus, not try to include everything.
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Short answer: What makes a thesis “arguable”?
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It presents a viewpoint or recommendation that reasonable people might disagree with, not just a simple fact.
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Multiple-choice: Which thesis best connects to SDG 10?
a) “Students like to use social media.”
b) “Schools should give extra support to learners from low-income families so that income does not decide who passes exams.”
c) “Everyone loves weekends.”
d) “Reading is important.”Show Answer
The correct answer is b).
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Short answer: Why should a thesis match the reasons and evidence you plan to use?
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Because if they do not match, the editorial will feel confusing and your arguments will not clearly support your main point.
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Multiple-choice: Which of these is most likely too broad for a one-page editorial?
a) “Our school should create a food support programme for hungry learners.”
b) “The world must solve all inequality everywhere.”
c) “The library should extend its opening hours for exam classes.”
d) “Our town needs more safe pedestrian crossings near schools.”Show Answer
The best answer is b).
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Short answer: Give one way to make your thesis more specific.
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You can name a particular place, group of people, type of inequality, or concrete action instead of speaking in general terms.
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Multiple-choice: Which sentence shows a respectful tone?
a) “Only stupid leaders ignore inequality.”
b) “Our leaders must stop being lazy.”
c) “Local leaders must listen carefully to communities affected by inequality and act quickly.”
d) “Anyone who disagrees is heartless.”Show Answer
The correct answer is c).
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Short answer: Write a transition phrase you could use just before stating your thesis in an introduction.
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Examples: “For this reason, I believe…,” “This is why I strongly argue that…,” or “Therefore, we must…”
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Multiple-choice: Which part of your editorial should remind readers of your thesis in new words?
a) Introduction
b) Body paragraph 1
c) Conclusion
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The best answer is c), though the introduction also states it clearly.
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Short answer: How can using a thesis checklist help you as a writer?
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It helps you quickly see whether your thesis has the qualities of a strong claim and shows you exactly what to improve.
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Reflection check: In one or two sentences, describe how your understanding of thesis statements has changed after this lesson.
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Sample answer: “Before, I thought a thesis was just a sentence about the topic. Now I see it must be clear, specific, and arguable, and it guides everything else I write.”
🚀 Go Further
Choose one or more activities to deepen your work with thesis statements, or use them as extension tasks.
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Collect three headlines from news articles about global issues and turn each one into a possible thesis for an editorial.
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Teacher guidance: Ask learners to underline the action words and specify who should act, helping them move from neutral headlines to arguable claims.
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Take an old paragraph you wrote on a global topic and write a new thesis that could guide that paragraph more clearly.
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Teacher guidance: Encourage learners to check whether each sentence in the paragraph supports the new thesis; if not, they can revise or cut sentences.
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Create a mini-poster titled “Strong Thesis, Strong Voice” that lists your personal checklist and one example thesis you are proud of.
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Teacher guidance: Display posters in the classroom as visual reminders during future writing sessions.
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Work in a small group to sort a set of thesis statements into “strong,” “needs revision,” and “weak” categories, explaining your choices.
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Teacher guidance: Provide printed slips or project sample theses; guide groups to refer to the checklist, not just personal taste.
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Start a “thesis bank” in your notebook where you store strong thesis ideas on different global issues for possible future writing.
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Teacher guidance: Remind learners to label each thesis with the related SDG and global issue to build cross-curricular connections.
🔗 My Reflection
Notebook task: In 5–7 sentences, reflect on your work with thesis statements today.
- Which example or activity helped you understand strong vs weak theses most clearly?
- How confident do you feel about the thesis you chose for your own editorial on a global issue?
- What is one specific step you will take next lesson to keep improving your thesis and support for it?
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